marzera

My name is Marzera, and I'm writing a OELN (Original English Light Novel) series called Blackfire. Blackfire is about twin sisters Serah and Mika Pharris, on their road to being certified Mages and beyond in a medieval fantasy world. The goal behind the series is to write more realistic characters that still feel like they would belong in an Anime or Manga. They have their ups and downs, they make mistakes, and those mistakes have concequences. And I don't mean the type you get to walk away from. It's the first time I've written anything expansive, I'm used to writing stuff that exit in under 1000 characters; Eulogies, short digests. Nothing professional though, just for friends and family. Most often it's a small story with a punchline. So, please! Give me some advice if my writing is too fast, too slow. I have an outline for each 'Book' I write, and I keep writing until the high point (or in some cases, the low point?) is reached naturally.